Do you have shoes that you have no problem when that is devastated? You need that for exercising for your fitness.
I warry your shoes became devastated for your shoes when we kicked a ball after we practice adjusting his voice when you came my house to play.
いつもご利用いただきありがとうございます。添削についてですが、次回から日本語も添えて書いていただけますか？ 講師が内容を正確に把握したうえで添削したいと要望がありました。日本語もありますとより正確に添削可能ですので、よろしくお願いします。
承知しました．より良く添削いただけるようお気遣いありがとうございます．
本件も日本語を追記した方がよろしいでしょうか．
そうですね。お願いします。
Do you have shoes that you have no problem when that is devastated? You need that for exercising for your fitness.
I warry your shoes became devastated for your shoes when we kicked a ball after we practice adjusting his voice when you came my house to play.
壊れてもよい靴持ってない？健康のために運動しているけど，その時に，壊れてもよい靴を履いてもらった方がよいね．
いつも遊びに来たとき，声出し練習の後，ボールを蹴って遊んでる．その時に，あなたの靴が壊れてしまうのが心配なんだよ．
Do you have shoes that you have no problem when that is devastated? You need that for exercising for your fitness.
--> Do you have any shoes for my exercise that you wouldn't mind breaking?
I warry your shoes became devastated for your shoes when we kicked a ball after we practice adjusting his voice when you came my house to play.
--> We had already practiced kicking a ball and cheering when you came to my house to play. I was worried your shoes would break.