I met one of my friends the other day. It was a long time no see her. I met her on a road last time, She introduced a massager who is a friend to her. The massager hasn't been in Miyagi already. She moved to Tokyo two years ago for a new job. By the way, despite I met her a long time no see, Her comment to me was "Did you put on a little weight?". What a nice comment for me! I have been trying to less weight for a three months. I absolutely thought I have lost weight until then. Her comment crashed my little dream. Because I wanted to be a toned body. I didn't want to measure my weight until then but I decided to measure my weight. There it is! It has become the highest record! I am in the midst of replacing the highest record. See? I did it! :_( :_( :_(
I met one of my friends the other day. It was a long time no see her. I met her on a road last time, She introduced a messenger massager who is a friend to her. The massager message hasn't been in Miyagi already. She moved to Tokyo two years ago for a new job. By the way, despite I met her a long time no see, Her comment to me was "Did you put on a little weight?". What a nice comment for me! I have been trying to less lose weight for a three months. I absolutely thought I had have lost weight until then. Her comment crushed crashed my little dream. Because I wanted to be a toned body. I didn't want to measure my weight until then, but I decided To measure my weight. There it is! It has become the highest record! I am in the midst of replacing the highest record. See? I did it! :_( :_( :_
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I met one of my friends the other day. It was a long time that I don't see her. I met her on a road last time. She introduced a messenger who is a friend to her. The message hasn't been in Miyagi already. She moved to Tokyo two years ago for a new job. By the way, despite I met her a long time no see, her comment to me was "Did you put on a little weight?". What a nice comment for me! I have been trying to lose weight for a three months. I absolutely thought I had lost weight until then. Her comment crushed my little dream. Because I wanted to be a toned body. I didn't want to measure my weight until then, but I decided To measure my weight. There it is! It has become the highest record! I am in the midst of replacing the highest record. See? I did it! :_( :_( :_(
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I met one of my friends the other day. It has been a long time not seeing her. I met her on the road last time. She introduced a masseuse who is a friend to her. The masseuse hasn't been in Miyagi already. She moved to Tokyo two years ago for a new job. By the way, despite of not seeing her for a long time, her comment to me was "Did you put on a little weight?". What a nice comment for me! I have been trying to lose weight for a three months. I absolutely thought I had lost weight until then. Her comment crashed my little dream. Because I wanted to have a toned body. I didn't want to measure my weight until then but I decided to measure my weight. There it is! It has become the highest record! I am in the midst of replacing the highest record. See? I did it! :_( :_( :_(
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